The Duel - Retouched

This is my very first FMG story ever written, but retouched 3 years later.  You can read the original in its entirety here:  http://magnusmagneto.deviantart.com/art/The-Duel-Female-Muscle-Growth-story-295066654

This retouching simply cleans up some grammar, actually introduces line-breaks for dialogue, and removes a lot of needless adverbs.  It does not add or remove any sizable amount of content.

You can download it for free, or leave me a tip to show your appreciation, if you'd like.